Wycked Pete said: February 10, 2012 11:11 am PST
I like the web page, a hugely needed improvement. Who did it? I am working on revamping mine as we write. Why is the brick building so grainy? Can you do things to bold the name, brighten up the logo, etc. Great start though. You might also want to check your grammar in the stories, it is very colloquial, is that what you are looking for, or do you want it to be mainstream dialogue?
proud of you sis!
